The Proposal
His hand pushed my hair behind my ear
and I just stood
trembling when he came near.
His hand pushed my hair behind my ear,
the words thickened with fear,
If only I could.
His hand pushed my hair behind my ear
and I just stood.
...May 2003
posted by Elizabeth @ 10:15 AM
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1 Comments:
I really like the repetition here. it represents a moment, stuck in time. It's an interesting feeling and perfectly captured. A moment between moments.
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